1. the control panel where marchie wass facing, showing the outer view of space, very peaceful as in no big obstacles that's blocking his way to Planet Peepo
2. In the 1st hour, Marchie was very exciting as this was the first time
3. 2nd hour, not excited and started to feel bored and tired
4. coming 3rd hour, Marchie was no longer excited, feeling tired and sleepy
5. .... (fall asleep)
6. a huge meteorite was just in front of Marchie! The whole spaceship was in dangerous mode, warning sign on the screen and red lights were all on
7. but he had no realization and still in his sleeping wonderland
8. collision between spaceship with a giant meteorite
9. spaceship were knocked down and landed on earth
Evaluation 4
[online evaluation by my SIG tutor: Andrew Pearsall]
looks good but your style seems to missing in the design of the cockpit of the spaceship, it reminds me of a plane emulation game and miss's some of your humor and illustrative style. animates well
[Comments from friends]
- looking good but seems that your illustrative style and the photo collage were not matching, in another word, no consistent
- don't really get the message, why jumping scene showing spaceship then marchie then spaceship
- since my audience saying the message is not clear, so my next step will be creating a short dialouge box at the bottom of my animation or maybe showing a static image with story lines describing where Marchie is heading to, what's his purpose and why is he on the spaceship before opening animation
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