Evaluation 1

1. Background is alright. Make the fire flies in the bottle move randomly will be much more better and interesting.
2. Message not clear as in audience didnt notice Marchie broke his teeth when he bite on the hard nut! (Do another cut on the mirror and close up on Marchie's gum and show how he broke his teeth)
3. Background music is fine. Add in sound effects on those little little action such as frustrated sound, broken teeth, kicking nut and so on.
4. Need to exaggerate the animation and Marchie's facial expression/ body movement/ branches moving/ mushroom moving.
5. Eating part (cheating!) make biting shape and eat bit by bit and not one whole nut followed by another one whole nut.
6. No shadow on the character (seems floating in the air)
7. Nut should have crack when it hits the wall.